Update: Don't mean to be rude...but 1 comment per person please. I want this to be a collective story.
Ok, this is what I want to do.
I want to develop a story. But I don't know what I want to write. I just know I want a story.
So this is how the game will be played.
1. I will start with a sentence. Just some thought that is playing in my head right now.
2. Each comment posted, should take the story a little forward.
3. (Request) Each comment to have about 3 sentences max.
4. We will do this till Monday evening and then I will consolidate and put it together for everyone to read.
Let's see what we come up with.
p.s. I really hope that it is a story. Not just random, unrelated sentences. So, please, if you do comment, then I request you to make it cohesive. Please.
So here's the start:
I was alone and lonely. But that didn't matter much.
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Cuz I am used to staying alone since I was a kid. But that day was exceptionally. Was feeling really down & was yearning for some companion.
and then I decided to blog. Was going through many blogs, and then I came across one which said 'Who is John GAlt' John Galt has been one of my heroes...
I read all the posts, it helped me, but not completely. I ran my fingers through the pile of books i had, took my favorite "Atlas Shrugged" and then went for an aimless walk. I found a hilltop, sat there with my favorite book and started reading.
i made myself availible for all.any one can have my time, my support bt then at the end of the day i was again alnoe n lonely...
perhaps my loneliness is only my state of mind ,i do have all around me but still..
I went to sleep all alone and miserable. I woke up suddenly in the middle of the night. There was a woman sitting on the edge of my bed.
she sat by my head, tenderly ruffling my hair with her fingers, playing the melody of her touch. I looked at her face
and struggled with my tears, till the agony of unspoken words burst my loneliness like a bubble.
I looked at her face yet could not discern the features. Her hair falling over me close to my face, I could smell the familiar fragrance. But it was her eyes that drew me in.
I saw tears well in her eyes.
Those tear streaked face and eyes mesmerized me. I stood spellbound, never had I seen anyone look more forlorn and yet so divine. I gulped and moved forward… I just wanted to reach out and see if she was real.
she looked real yet very fictious, pearly tears, Naww they couldn't be real, they were just too perfect, as if she knew exactly how to cry.
her eyes welled perpetually.my heart sank. i move forward and wiped her tears and said " Don t worry...everything will be alright."
Then I tenderly and gently took her in my arms.
She sighed and held me so very tightly!
Wow, it just felt sooooo good & warm. Suddenly I felt she was all over me & then she started licking me! I open my eyes only to find that I was in my dreamland & it was dog who was actually licking me!
I groaned and laughed at the same time,ruffeled the hair on the dogs head.I should have known this was too good to be true.It was 3 AM soo off again to never, never land
I woke up late. It was raining outside. And Gosh, I had left a window open last night.. Across I went to the window only to see a familiar face standing at some distance..
Who cares for a little bout of loneliness while Bruno(my dog) is around? He is always around and more faithful than a wife. But then, I've never had a wife, or even a girlfriend.
Sorry.. looks like the new cloud and I posted simultaneously.
Tht familiar face was the same like the lady sitting on the edge of the bed. If i run down n catch her will she be mine or will she leave till i reach there leaving me more lonelier than ever before. Thoughts were racing in my mind..
My mind is racing
My thoughts are overwhelmed with the idea of getting to know her better.
I am running to catch her... and my heart is racing ... racing so very quickly!
I hurried to the bus stand, where she was standing. As I reached, she boarded a bus, and I followed her on it, hoping to talk to her.
She sat in the front seat, and I sat close behind her. The bus started moving, and after 20 mins of anxious waiting and heart throbbing, she finally turned and looked behind...
"Darling," she exclaimed, holding out her arms. My breath caught and I turned a pale crimson. She was talking to the guy behind me.
Typical!
Truely, madly, deeply wishing that this would indeed turn out to be a dream, I turned around to take a quick glance at the guy behind me. Pleasantly flabbergasted was i. I was staring into a pair of blind eyes - a 10 year old kid was he.
if only I could have her soft arms around my neck agian, I thought, I wouldn't even mind being a blind ten year old...if only...but the IF was always there...
And then in a moment, our eyes met!
She looked at me and I looked at her.
She said, " That is my nephew, and I am taking him to lunch, would you care to join us? I do not usually invite strangers to lunch, but you look so familiar to me!"
I replied"I too dont accept invitations from strangers usually, but you will be an exception." :):)
We both smiled a tender smile at each other!
I could feel such a connection to her.... was she feeling it also?
We took her nephew by the hand, and stepped off the bus.
we walked to a sea side restaurant. There was need to talk but our silence spoke more than words. My nephew could sense this bonding and had a sweet smile....
Smiles all around... blissful moments!
There is so much I want to say to her... I am feeling such peace being here with her and her nephew!
Later in a more private place, I will tell her what my heart is yearning to.
We are having a wonderful lunch together, and she is so sweet and attentive to her nephew.
But, she keeps looking at her watch, and I wondering if she is getting bored with my company.
Then, she says, "It is time I take my nephew home, please come with us.
I did not want to go because I have to meet friends at the club.
Me and my few guy pals we were waiting in line to go to this exclusive club.
I saw HER with another male kissing in public.
@ Hey margie...chill...need a collective story..not only from you!! :-))) new rule !! just 1 comment per person allowed in this story!
sorry i will delete some
very sorry!
The green-eyed monster reared his ugly head. I picked up my swiss army knife and charged towards them.
'Cuz I had to finish making the chocolate cake.
But soon I realised that it wasnt any lovers' kiss but a peck to her darling dad. By then I was almost near her with the knife and quickly changed direction towards the tree....
ooopppsss, another clash (white magpie and astral!) anand, you decide....
I felt I am a hero of of kolly hood kind - jumped into the bully to get a bulls eye in my face like amir khan in dil chakta hai.
" who is he darling"
mouth stuck stood my dream gal in real
sorry when i typed - the story had continued out of the scene - sorry guys. please continue from the person above me
Too late! Dad and she had seen me already.
"Isn't he the same guy whose face you draw in all your pics?"
Her dad was looking at her puzzled and hearing that, I forgot about my knife, n the tree n evrything else!
The crash was loud and clumsy. Adding to the embarrassment was the realisation that I had not even opened the knife. And that goofy laugh of the dad didnt help at all. I felt I had lost everything I had in that one moment.
i had made a fool of myself n just wanted to run away from there..during these feelings going within my mind, she holded my hands from behind n sweetly said "i luv u"....ahhhh tht 1 moment life seemed soo beautiful:))i wished time to stop then n there...but
Her dad smiled at me and said, 'Son, I have to leave now. Would you make sure this crazy daughter of mine gets home safe? She's gone and crashed her car. Again. You seem like a nice chap.'
He nods to him and promises to take home his daughter. Later he opens the door and gives a warm welcome to sit in the front with a smile but his eyes never took off seeing her beauty. When she sees his eyes, she feels butteflies inside her thoughts making her happy.
He wants her to stay a little longer, he is mesmerized with her beauty. "what should I do " he thinks. Dad says I have to drop her back soon. She wants to stay longer too.
And then he realized that he hasn't eaten since morning. Even she hasn't eaten since morning and this is the reason why there are butterflies two comments above. So they go out to eat. Since he does not have his driving license yet she insists on driving and the same thing happens again.
Crash...Boom...Bang....
ahh..then he realized he was much better when he was alone and lonely.....
by this time I dunno what's going on in this story cos Im so late Anand...anyways let me pick up from what STONE stated above. btw thats not a nice thing to say Stone lol!
But then again he realised he needed some excitement like that to spark some fire in his o.w boring life...
Keshi.
Wait a sec, How come the narration suddenly changed from first person to third person? Please get back to first person.
Anand, hope you dont mind my intrusion.
suddenly anand, remembered that his love for ekta. what is loneliness? all i need to do is buy her a chocolate house.
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